This could definitely be a very good concept. You should make the logline a bit more interesting or in depth though. Maybe you could say something about a difficulty Alexa has to overcome or another girl who is contesting for Gianni's affections or a secret Gianni has or something.
I agree with Claire. The idea is definitely good and will be a fun story to develop. The logline could use a bit more specifics by interesting a twist or something that will spark interest.
This could definitely be a very good concept. You should make the logline a bit more interesting or in depth though. Maybe you could say something about a difficulty Alexa has to overcome or another girl who is contesting for Gianni's affections or a secret Gianni has or something.
ReplyDeleteNicely said, good luck.
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ReplyDelete1. I think your awesome but besides that, I like the concept I think it can open alot of doors to diffrent change in events.
ReplyDelete2. You tell us what the story is about and the main character aswell as having her whole love life at stake.
3. It makes me want to know more about the story and how she will try to get the end result
I agree with Claire. The idea is definitely good and will be a fun story to develop. The logline could use a bit more specifics by interesting a twist or something that will spark interest.
ReplyDeleteYou could probably include an attribute of the main character like a personality problem she has like anxiety or somethin. :D just a thought.
ReplyDeletethanks i used the anxiety thing :)
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